This story is the continence
of Lilly Sanders adventures on land dealing with a new boyfriend and
if you had read Forgive My Finns turned out to be her annoying but
obsessed next door neighbor, regular high school life, Merfolk life,
a under water kingdom waiting for at the end of her sixteenth
birthday and now having her bratty cousin hanging around. I f you
think my synapses is short then that is because there really isn't
too much to tell about this story. (So to be so harsh). Now I know
what your thinking if I read the first installment of this story and
didn't like it then why the h#ll did I read the second installment?
Well I believe in giving
authors another chance to redeem themselves. I mean really come on
aren't we all human? Haven't we all had an idea that we were sure at
the time was the best idea that was ever invented only to find out
that not only has someone already either attempted this idea or has
succeeded at it and when I say succeeded at I mean created something
that was a thousand times better than the sh#t that you came up with?
I mean really how many mermaid books are out there on the YA market
? No really how many? Just asking because while there are a lot to
explore Mermaids books are still behind werewolf, vampire and faerie
books so being that as it may why would Childs take something that
has such potential and turn it into something so completely boring!
Being a fly on the wall of Lilly Sanderson's life is like being a fly
on the wall of your Grandparent's life and not some of those really
activate Grandparent's but those go to bed at like 6 pm, bingo
playing, stamp collecting Grandparents.
Too harsh? Well if you
think so then let me quickly some up how the story actually went
down. Ahem. * clears throat * Okay Lilly is sitting in class
swooning over Quence instead of paying attention to the teacher, a
mysterious earthquake happening and everyone is scared and then
nothing. Her cousin mysteriously shows up on land on
her her door step looking for a place to live with little to no
explanation and then nothing. Lilly is upset because
she has to show her cousin around and teach her how to do things on
land and then nothing.
Duo
meets Brody starts falling head over heels for him while Lilly gets
mad for whatever reason (I thought it was some small torch that she
still carried for Brody only because that's the way Childs made it
seem) that the two of them are spending more and more time together
and then nothing.
Duo kisses Brody and bonds with him after Lilly warned her not to
make that happen(Which I don't know why because as far as I see it
Duo is a big girl that can take care of her self) , Duo soon after
starts making treats to steal Quence away from Lilly and then
nothing.
Lilly has to now bring Brody back home to get a separation for Duo
seeing is how Duo is exiled from the ocean and can't go and do this
her self and along the way Lilly runs into a childhood friend who is
having problems with his kingdom and then forms a plan to have Lilly
bond with him to save his kingdom(like she's the magic cure to his
problems) and then more nothing.
Oh yeah Lilly and Quence also have a break and then get back together
again in the process. The end. Now you see, completely not worth my
time. But before I get to my personal rating system I just have one
question that I forgot to during the review of the first installment.
If the Merfolk live in little kingdoms that is disguised as coral
reefs than wouldn't they have to shrink down actual cor size in
order to live in them? I mean if these coral houses are human sized
wouldn't they have been discovered? I don't know that's just my
hypothetical question. Okay my personal ratings. As for the scenery
I'll give a 3 out of 10 stars. The plot a 2 out of 10 stars. The
characters 4 out of 10. The cover art a 3 out of 10. And the overall
experience a 3 out of 10. Will I read another installment of this
novel? Yes only to see if Childs has the ability to save this sinking
ship.
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